April 22, 2021 Reflection

Today in class we looked at a few people's bio and pointed out the good and bad points of their bios. I was fortunately picked in class to get advice from Mr. Paterson and there were a few points in both my writing and in my picture that I needed to change. Firstly in my picture, the fact that the picture was blurred in the back was a good thing, but the fact that I was facing forward in the picture and not slanted gave it a too formal look and was too boring to be a picture in a bio. Another thing I should have focused on is taking a picture of where I am doing something.  I thought that because I mentioned doing football in the bio, I wanted to have some pictures of me doing a sport so I would like to get a picture like that. Secondly, on the writing part, I had one part where I wrote, "mostly white population" and Mr. Paterson pointed out that just because someone is white doesn't mean that they were going to speak English.  

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