11/26 Reflection

Today was the last day to finish the brochure and essay. One thing we had to rush on was the website because we were so caught up in the essay that we were not able to get our hands on the website. The AWL and RL were also really hard because we had to force our paragraph into sounding hard and high level but I thought that took away the creativity we had in our writing. For example, one of my group members wanted to make a high leveled sentence so they used the word developed in the sentence multiple. Times. Consequently, because the word developed was hackneyed even though it was higher in level it was forced and was not a sentence that was enjoyable.