11/19 Reflection

On this day we continued writing our essay. The focus of the day was to finish our body paragraph. Some things we tried to fix were the use of pronouns. In our paragraphs we had a lot of pronouns including we, i, and you and so we tried to eliminate those as much as possible. The process we took to get rid of all the pronouns was to find them and replace them with better words that don't have pronouns in them. One thing that was hard was trying to find words to replace them and when I was able to replace it it was hard to find new words and not the words we already used for the other replacements.