Feed back Reflection

Today, I did my presentation feedback and got back the things I needed to do before I turn the essay back in in December. For the presentations, the first thing I would do is move the influences slide to the about the author slides. I had it in my critique because the influences may have varied from how we interpreted the story, but it was more of an informational fact about the book so I was told to bring it in the About the Author. Other than that I had to fix my photo credits. Firstly, the pictures weren't aligned on both sides. I aligned them on the left side of the slide because the size varied but I should've adjusted it on both sides. I also had to shorten the links using bitly. For my essay, most of the edits I still had to do were from the turn it in grade. I would like to start doing these fixes soon.